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Pretty Apples and Broken Sands by ~innocent-six:iconinnocent-six:



If i'm the daughter of a war lord
and your the son of a priest
then does that make me the liar
or you the dirty beast?

If im the bitch in the dirty bloody wings
and your the bastard with the dying girls that sings
then do you bring in the bells that ring
or do I set up the poison apples to bring?

If you are in robes of white
and I'm here with the humans set up for hell
then which cruel place has been truly wronged
Is it just me is the devil herself?

alone here i sit to think and consider
to be rid ones self
of the devil on her shoulder
and the bible glued to the shelf...
©2007-2009 ~innocent-six
:iconinnocent-six:

Author's Comments

yeah...im not sure where i was going with this >_< haha! yeah...you know the drill...

tell me all thoughts?

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I like how you used a different rhyming scheme in each stanza, very interesting.

--
You've been through all of
F. Scott Fitzgerald's books
You're very well read
It's well known-Bob Dylan
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thanks...i love patterns...even if the pattern is that there simply is no pattern haha =]

--
* Plaything Sics *
Read the poetry...its my best work. =]

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